I stagger up to the derelict house as I glare up looking at the spooky house on the shadow hill. I put my hand on the rusty gate as It slowly opens making a creaking sound. Lightning strikes below in the unsearchable fog. I gulp. I firm my hands as I run into the fog. I glare around searching for the hill until a scream echos in my ear. It's in the other direction. I run to the mysterious scream. As I charge with all my energy I run to it as I stare with fright. There is a doll on the floor with a piece of paper written in blood it says HELP ME!
I open the door as a big squeaking sound echos in my ear. A pitch black room with absolutely nothing in there. I hear the door slam behind me. I gulp. As I breath slowly not trying to make a sound I trip over a piece of paper. I glare as I can just see writing on the paper.It says SAVE YOURSELF! in really warm kinda liquid until I realized what it was. It was blood. I walk around petrified as I hear a loud gunfire I jump in shock I quickly try to find the door. I find it. I jump out and start running . I stop for a break.'' Why is there red paint on the ground?'' I say. I looked down at my belly with a big bloody hole with blood oozing like a fountain as i tumble to the ground. I have been shot.
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