The box. The door.The crumbling brick.It begged to enter.I stand in front of the door hesitating to enter.I dont know what to choose enter or walk away pretending I never saw it. im standing coherence what will happen.Whispers of temptation in my mind making me confused. Now in my head I am hearing voices calling me to come closer. arms of temptation drag me through the door . I regret what I have done I am now in a room a dark room with a beam of light shining down at me . . .
Use descriptive language
Use similes Read through to make sure it makes sense read through a second time It's like a green fuzz ball with hands,legs,eyes and a big cheeky grin planted on his face. It has razor sharp teeth the size of knives.His feet are huge with claws half the size. He has a big grin and it doesn't look friendly . It has bushy eyebrows and bulging out eyes. He looks nothing like a human.His fur is green and fluffy,and is almost like a bush.
Reading:
I am good at reading out loud and my pronunciation. I need to improve on understanding what words mean. Maths: I am good at my times table, basic facts and math strategies. I need to improve on my decimals. Aspire: I am good at coming up with questions. I need to improve on getting information. Writing: I am using good language. I need to use more descriptive writing. Social: I am good at working in groups. I need to improve on getting involved in school sports. - sport\rugby. - getting involved\school. -being able to work by myself. Its tail is as scaly as a snake. Its teeth are as sharp as a sharks spiky teeth. It smells like a mans hairy pits. Its hair is as wavy as the sea. Its horns are as pointy as a pin . its breath is as shocking as electricity. Its leg are as big as an elephant. Its pet mouses squeak is as high as a girl screaming. His beard are as long as a girls hair. His tuxedo is as dark as night. His pattern is as colourful as a rainbow. The couches mustache is as long as someones curly hair. “ 3,2,1 GO! the hunt begins” . A surge of people run up the hill . It is dark all i can see is flashing beam of light . Suddenly a light flashes and a voice says spot light! Luckily it wasn’t me a boy gives his life to the spotter.
I am now by myself my heart is pounding . Then a light flashes out of no where at me . I think i am out but it is just my friend Bradon with Olivia. We are creeping through the bushes,all we can hear is is parents repetitively saying spotlight . my friend bardon sees a teacher , we all sprinted behind the tree we were safe for now.There were still more Bradon and Olivia got caught when we were almost up the hill .I only just got up the hill before time ran out. I am relieved that I didn’t get caught ,I am excited about winning and getting passed all the parents . I enjoyed playing spotlight with my friends. this is definitely a game I want to play again. |
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