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Ahhhhhh I say as I wake up for my morning nap, from footsteps getting closer every minute until a tall lean man is right outside... Roof Roof Roof I bark as the humanly figure gets the fright of his life. I bark even more but the man disappears "boo" he shouts as I smack my head on the driver’s seat, I shake out my dizziness get back up on all fours and go on a rampage at him which makes him think? He walks away like nothing happened until there he is again under the window he pops up and gives me a fright of my life so where even I say to myself as he turns his back and starts dancing but I’m not done yet... I find the window lever and slowly push it down, he slowly turns around and backs away from me he scrambles for his keys and tries to unlock his car but it doesn’t work the window is ¾ the way down he breaks into the car and hotwires it the windows getting down but it’s too late, he’s gone driving down the car park pulling faces as I say goodbye to my fellow friend. Report writing
Reading: I am improving on my research work, gathering information and working well in a group reading task but my next step would be to put the information in my own words. Writing: I am doing well in my writing finishing of well (conclusion) and using different sentences but I would like to work on organising my ideas into clear paragraphs. Maths: I am improving my time and score on basic facts and getting lots more comfortable with my fractions, decimals and percent. I need to work on my adding and subtracting fractions. Aspire: I thought I was making a good connection with the elderly and planed a games night wiched help summed up my conclusion. My next step would be to have more confident when i’m presenting. Social: I think I get along with most of the people in my class and work well in groups and independently but time management is something I need to work on. Goals: 1. To get in maths extension 2. Do well in Palmerston North for Balmacewen in cricket 3.Get better speeches and standing up in front of the class arm chair writing The moonlight shone on the damp lime green hat, the stars glittering up the pitch black night. Hes a speechless shadow hiding in the corner ready to be discovered, His baby tooth rotten to death replaced with a pure gold with only the smallest bugs that only his tongue can feel, his fluro orange glasses are part of his body connected to him like a bit of his heart, his tummy bouncing like a squirting marshmallow ready to exploded his eyes light up the room and his mustache is like curly fries, ready salted. The snow blinds my eyes as I’m setting out to begin my quest.I trot alone leaving deep foot prints behind me, wind washes up the no good snow, mountain lions roar away into the right. When darkness falls there nothing but the sound of my beating and my lungs shivering to stay alive as I set up my tent
That morning I woke up to a BANG the wind hits the tent like a whip, I un-snuggle myself shivering in despair I stretch my legs, walk to the door and have a look what today will be like, suddenly a ferocious pack of mountain lions came clashing down the hill at an unreadable rate. As quick as a flash I leap into my tent hoping they won’t find me as 88 muscular legs ZOOM down the hill , as the sound fades away i take a peek “they’re gone” I say excitedly. I start my search of what I came here for to find the snake-headed frog, I trot along the sharp stoney hill and sitting their leaping from rock to rock “I've found it at last” jumping around I grab my backpack and get a box out. I feed the snake-headed frog closer to me and lay him in the 12 inch box. I don’t worry about my tent I’m a millionaire if I get this creature back alive. I bolt down the mountain faster than a cheater passing every object that comes near me. It takes a while before I’m down the mountain, “I’ve finished my quest I say to myself” as I walk onto my destination. Cam Here is our report on missing flight MH370.
spotlight
It feels like my life is on the line,I look around at the other contestants… Before i knew it the countdown was on 3,2,1 let the games begin. As my crew and I crept to the pitch black play ground,the only glimpses of light were torches flashing on and off.”RUN“, Says a voice running down the slippery soggy hill,There’s parents everywhere “run, run for your life!!” We gas it back up the slippery soft stones.”Up the hill”, whispers a voice.We stride up the hill never feeling as scared as before. We tip-toe through the long thick grass,”Wait! whats that sound“ I say (nobody answered) It goes quiet as quiet as a lion stalking its prey.”Turn that torch off“ I say as i’m shivering in fear “its not us” RAAAA!!!!!” says a man from within it seams to be an bottomless pit. “RUN” we all shout off we go as quick as a flash torches flashing everywhere. We rush through all are objects in our way, we’re losing crew every second, the finish is within my reach.” Shh!! there’s parents close by” torches flashing everywhere as I dance from tree to tree.I leap to the finish, all that I could hear was spotlight,spotlight and spotlight from every direction I begin my final sprint. I’m here ! As I reach Miss Smart all that was coming out of my mouth was a hurricane of puff “we survived” we all say. I look around at the other players, wheres their lives I wonder, what happened in their quest to the top? |
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