I need to improve on the feelings that my characters feel and what he sees around him.
I need to improve on putting capital letters in the right place
I need to improve on putting capital letters in the right place
I need to improve on the feelings that my characters feel and what he sees around him.
I need to improve on putting capital letters in the right place
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Boom!!!!! the paper rustled in the destroyed hallway.
As I get up looking at the mess I made, I walk out of the class room. I see the teacher looking terrified at me on the phone and know its time to go . I steel the bike and flee I get to the house and get my back pack and run. As I go to the door I see the shadows of the guns in the curtains. I use the force and get the keys i run to the forest. I feel terrified. The End The mischievous figure is green with an oval shaped body with a sticking out face he has a black eyes always frowning and sharp teeth and toes. This persons name is Boris he always is asleep at day and a wake at night. no one knows what he does but me and my friends are going to find out. as the night only begins we wait at the night where he lives we wait till we hear the sound of his bellowing footsteps echoing under his bridges. unexpectedly we see the shadow of Boris limping towards the entrance. we run over the bridge but as we run across the bellowing footsteps are getting closer........... the footsteps stop and we run back and hope to never come back Reading: I understand what I am reading and how to say it. I want to be able to read clearer in my reading groups. Writing: I am beginning to be creative with my writing. I want to work on using more descriptive language so it sounds interesting. maths: I want to get a good time in my basic maths and get a good score.Ii work well in math but I want to work quicker to complete work. Aspire: I want to work harder towards my aspire and not take a long time. My aspire was better when I didn't rush. Social: I think I could get better friendships if I stopped being silly and being in trouble. I think that I'm good at joining in to games and work well in sports teams.
Splosh, splosh as the mouldy ice cream fell from the ugly face of what was an ice-cream. "I am a dark thug like thing, I'm a light blue ice-cream with a pink cone. I have chocolate sauce all over me and it looks like mud. I look weird with this big yellow light bulb." He has angry feelings when people jump on My tent story
Woosh Woosh the nice snowy breeze began to go and the chill was getting colder, I would try light a fire but as you can see its snowing. I have to get warmed up but how I thought? As I'm thinking I feel a big shake pushing me around a earthquake I thought but as I Look out I see a huge snow storm coming me quick I got to get shelter but there's ferocious jagged rocks in front of me how could this day get any worse than it is but as I said that a nice tropical sun came out miracle I thought to myself but I still have to go. Really I have to get stabbed to save my life well yes I do, I got to try jump it, as I get a big run up and run thrusting my arms to and throw I hear something it sounds like gushing water but I didn’t think it would be, booooooom the snow broke, a giant Polar bear leaped out, the polar bear wounded me as it through me over the spikes. Im running for my life but as Im running I grab my climbing pickaxe out and chuck it at the beast as it lets out a great roar it tumbles to ground. the noises of the bear bring the helicopter towards me yes Im saved. Camp Recount
“Slow down slippery mud” the careful parents said, but as she said that I slipped on the gooey mud and got icky legs. I was happy to be on the hike because I was going to meet new people and make new friends . Josh,Finn,Thomas Mat and I pulled back to a gap where no one was and then started talking. As we were talking down the path, we hear Jenna scream out “We’re lost!” then yells marko. I whistle to see if anyone would reply and I heard a faint whistle off in the distance. I realised that we were finished, but as we arrived I got told its only half way. We have to walk back and I got extremely angry, but happy because I got to talk to new people. |
AuthorHi im Anthony and i am twelve my class is room 3 at balamacwewen intermediate, i love playing on my trampoline and playing on my ipod Archives
August 2014
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