MY CAMP RECOUNT
I quickly race in the pitch black night as i scavenge through my bag looking for my torch the countdown is starting. I race to the swarm of people lining up ready for spotlight I start wondering who I should go with. 5,4,3,2,1go!! . I gulp, the game has now started.
I quickly race across the forest looking at the people surging one way. I leap across the logs and mud as I see flickers of light flashing over the mountain top. I duck. I hear screams on the other hillside. I knew it was time to move. I quietly climb up the muddy stinky hill trying to find where the flickering light was until i finally see flickers of light up the hill. I bolt up the hill following their footsteps so I won’t fall. I then realized they had the same plan as me. I finally had caught up them and we started heading across the flying fox bridge. I smile. I stare at the finish seeing all the people sitting down I knew then I would make it. I get to the finish and show my friends my sticker I couldn’t believe I made it. As Miss Smart counts down to zero i rush down the hill to the bottom and quickly race to the hall. All the hard work and now finally I’m here collecting my prize. I think about all I went through climbing up a muddy hill, dodging logs,hearing screams and i managed to make it. And here I stand eating my prize as I get ready for supper.
By Shaquille
I quickly race in the pitch black night as i scavenge through my bag looking for my torch the countdown is starting. I race to the swarm of people lining up ready for spotlight I start wondering who I should go with. 5,4,3,2,1go!! . I gulp, the game has now started.
I quickly race across the forest looking at the people surging one way. I leap across the logs and mud as I see flickers of light flashing over the mountain top. I duck. I hear screams on the other hillside. I knew it was time to move. I quietly climb up the muddy stinky hill trying to find where the flickering light was until i finally see flickers of light up the hill. I bolt up the hill following their footsteps so I won’t fall. I then realized they had the same plan as me. I finally had caught up them and we started heading across the flying fox bridge. I smile. I stare at the finish seeing all the people sitting down I knew then I would make it. I get to the finish and show my friends my sticker I couldn’t believe I made it. As Miss Smart counts down to zero i rush down the hill to the bottom and quickly race to the hall. All the hard work and now finally I’m here collecting my prize. I think about all I went through climbing up a muddy hill, dodging logs,hearing screams and i managed to make it. And here I stand eating my prize as I get ready for supper.
By Shaquille