His green soft fluffy fur covers his body for warmth during the long dark nights. As his big eyes awaken , his long spotted tongue catches fly for breakfast. When hes walking his big toenails sink into the dirt to help steady his walking style. His sharp pointy teeth chomp away the tall trees in the forests. When hes trying to hide from predators its hard because of his big head and his giant feet . He is one of the only species around.
Josh
7/29/2014 09:28:06 am
Great story Finn! I like how you used the monsters body features to effect how he gets through the day.
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Mrs Garthwaite
8/12/2014 05:54:06 pm
This is developing well Finn. This describes the monster very well and builds a strong word picture. Keep building on this.
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