Ahhhhhh I say as I wake up for my morning nap, from footsteps getting closer every minute until a tall lean man is right outside... Roof Roof Roof I bark as the humanly figure gets the fright of his life. I bark even more but the man disappears "boo" he shouts as I smack my head on the driver’s seat, I shake out my dizziness get back up on all fours and go on a rampage at him which makes him think? He walks away like nothing happened until there he is again under the window he pops up and gives me a fright of my life so where even I say to myself as he turns his back and starts dancing but I’m not done yet... I find the window lever and slowly push it down, he slowly turns around and backs away from me he scrambles for his keys and tries to unlock his car but it doesn’t work the window is ¾ the way down he breaks into the car and hotwires it the windows getting down but it’s too late, he’s gone driving down the car park pulling faces as I say goodbye to my fellow friend.
Ahhhhhh I say as I wake up for my morning nap, from footsteps getting closer every minute until a tall lean man is right outside... Roof Roof Roof I bark as the humanly figure gets the fright of his life. I bark even more but the man disappears "boo" he shouts as I smack my head on the driver’s seat, I shake out my dizziness get back up on all fours and go on a rampage at him which makes him think? He walks away like nothing happened until there he is again under the window he pops up and gives me a fright of my life so where even I say to myself as he turns his back and starts dancing but I’m not done yet... I find the window lever and slowly push it down, he slowly turns around and backs away from me he scrambles for his keys and tries to unlock his car but it doesn’t work the window is ¾ the way down he breaks into the car and hotwires it the windows getting down but it’s too late, he’s gone driving down the car park pulling faces as I say goodbye to my fellow friend.
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Jacob
7/29/2014 09:29:12 am
Hey Cam, I really like how you've used really good visualizing like breaks into the car. I can really think of it.
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Vai
8/7/2014 06:48:33 am
Hi Cam, I liked how you used really well visualizing like breaks into a car because you can really picture it. Maybe you could add my descriptive words?
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Mrs Garthwaite
8/12/2014 08:52:37 am
You beginning to use some great language like rampage. Keep developing the description of the dog, include emotions and thoughts. It is entertaining to read.
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