There is a fluffy slouching green monster that lives in a cave down by a river bank, he has big bodging eyes and thick eye brows with sharp pointy teeth that stick out of his mouth. He might sound scary but he is not, he is extremely nice fluffy monster who get judged for what he looks like, he has silky green fur that over laps his back. Massive feet that stomp on everthing and anything in its way sheep ,cows, trees .
Saoirsen :-)
7/30/2014 05:27:17 pm
I really love your descriptive language eg. big bodging eyes
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Saoirse
7/30/2014 05:28:25 pm
woops I mean Saoirse
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Mrs Garthwaite
8/10/2014 06:26:15 pm
You are developing some good imagery and beginning to build up a strong word picture. Great to see you also describing some of the actions as well as the appearance. Keep developing your character.
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