-I need to work on adding more description in my story's.
- I also need to work on not adding the same sentence in my story more then twice.
- I also need to work on not adding the same sentence in my story more then twice.
-I need to work on adding more description in my story's.
- I also need to work on not adding the same sentence in my story more then twice.
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"Mummy,Mummy,Mummy".
"I can hear a cracking noise outside. "Can I have go and have a look" . "Yes you can Snowy". "Oh thanks mum". "Oh No". "The ice is breaking it's the end of the world". "I don't know what to do". "I do now what to do". " I will go and get some duck tape and tape it together"(So Snowy goes and gets the tape) "Mummy,mummy,mummy, look I fixed the ice with duck tape". "What did you do darling"... Charters : Bull 1 Bull 2 Bull 3 Crocodile Bull 1: What is that thing. Bull 2: It's a,wait I don't know. Bull 1: It's a crocodile. Bull 2: No it's a log. Bull 1: It's a crocodile. Bull 2: Log. Bull 1: (Throws a rock) crocodile Bull 2: Log. Bull 1: (pokes the animal) Bull 2: Log. Bull 1:(Splashes water at the animal,then jumps on it) Crocodile: (Eats bull 1) Bull 2: Crocodile. Bull 3: Log. |
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