Vibrant lavender colour floods the room, surrounding the chair. A grape smell wafted around the chair, intensifying the room with a lavender haze. Thick wooden legs stuck out like tree trunks, supporting the chair. Glass smashes as vigorous teeth begin crunching the lemony-orange fading light bulb. A loud chewing noise soaks the almost deserted room. Liveliness seems to be boiling inside the chair. Branchey arms flowed spontaneously splashed in an aroma of colours.
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Vibrant lavender colour floods the room, surrounding the chair. A grape smell wafted around the chair, intensifying the room with a lavender haze. Thick wooden legs stuck out like tree trunks, supporting the chair. Glass smashes as vigorous teeth begin crunching the lemony-orange fading light bulb. A loud chewing noise soaks the almost deserted room. Liveliness seems to be boiling inside the chair. Branchey arms flowed spontaneously splashed in an aroma of colours.
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Hannah
6/2/2014 05:38:38 pm
I really like how you have got straight into the description. The sentence starters you have used are punchy and descriptive. You have carefully chosen your adjectives! I think that you have used the word lavender in the first few sentences too much.
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Zoe
6/4/2014 01:21:28 pm
You have used some great descriptive words and your sentence starters add depth to your piece. You used various words choices that descibe your artwork really well. Maybe next time you could use a stronger finishing sentence. Cool artwork.
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Isabelle
6/4/2014 06:13:41 pm
I love your word choices Jenna especially aroma. Great job
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