Little Johnny was feeling bored. "I'm bored," he said. Along came big Pete. "Hey," he said energetically. "Hello," said Johnny "Nice day." "Nice day." The boring feeling of Johnny was really getting to big Pete. "Would yo like to try some of this.You look a bit dehydrated" "What's that?" "This?" "Yeah that." "Its pineapple juice." "Well whats that" " This," "Yeah that." "The pineapple juice." "Yeah the pineapple juice." "Well it's juice from a pineapple." "Oh." "Do you want some?" "Okay, how much does it cost." "Three dollars." "Three dollars, I don't have that sort of money." "But its free to people with the name Pete." "My names Pete!" Big Pete grabbed the glass of pineapple juice and slurped it down. "Guess what." "What" "Its Pee!" Big Pete walked away in disgust. Little Johnny was bored. Along came little roger.
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AuthorHi, my name is Jacob and I am Eleven. I am a Year Seven at Balmacewen Intermediate School. I enjoy to play Touch rugby and Cricket and was selected for the Otago team for both sports. I also play Rugby and Golf. Archives
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