I need to work on descriptive language and writing about my character more :3
Oh no i thought!!!
Lily ran off without me and jumped on the see saw. I jumped on the other end and she flipped and fell off. I grabbed her and and placed her back on. She felt like jelly. But William came and wanted to go on the swings. But he kept tripping over on nothing. So i go and push him on the swing. FLOP................... He just flops of like a wet fish. So i proped him up and swag him again. But lily was half way threw climbing down the see saw. but i was to late to get to her.... She flung up in the air. WOSHHHHHHHHHHHH I could not see her any more. Then William flung himself into the rubbish bin. 'LILY WERE ARE YOU?' I yelled. I was under the slide and she sliped down the slide and made me flip and face plant onto the ground head first. then my wife came...... |
izzyheyyyy my name is izzy and i am 11 and go to balmac. Archives
September 2014
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