The grouchy, no good for anything, lazy chair jerked and fluttered around to avoid the eye piercing light. The light is like the sun it will blind you as soon as you take a little peek at it. His legs are red chilli hot they are slowly cooking through the carpet as we speak. The of his legs are insane, they are huge sky towers.If you were to stand underneath, you would see four legs scattered around the room. His eyes are a mind blowing colour of green. His natural groovy green arms lay still and quietly on his lap.
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peter
6/3/2014 03:31:40 pm
I really like the way you wrote that the legs were like chilly peppers,
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olly
6/3/2014 05:16:09 pm
I like how you said the chair jearked away from the light bulb
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shaquille
6/4/2014 02:33:38 pm
OUTSTANDING PIECE OF WORK!!!
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Sarah
6/4/2014 02:38:43 pm
You used great descriptive words.
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finn
6/4/2014 04:09:00 pm
I liked how you used all those descriptive words. KEEP IT UP
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Saoirse
6/4/2014 04:32:01 pm
I like how you art has two light bulbs and you writing explains different features example: ( the chair jerked and fluttered around to avoid the eye piercing light ) I also like your pastel work/blending :)
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Lauren
6/13/2014 08:36:45 am
Wow Blake I love how you white and green pastel to make an awesome top light. Your story was really descriptive, it plants a vivid picture in my mind. One of my favourite bits was when you said 'cooking through the carpet as we speak' because it gives a more casual feeling to it.
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Saoirse again....................................
6/19/2014 04:36:14 pm
I love your use of a metaphor - they are huge sky towers! :)
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